Saturday, October 29, 2022

NaNoWriMo 2022: Announcing This Year's Novel!



Whew!! How is it almost November already?

This year has been... not quite like I thought it would be. Starting with battling Covid in January that set me back several months as my physical health recovered quite quickly, but my mental health (namely the psychological wherewithal to write) took a nosedive for several months... and then, just when I was getting to the end of a very stressful school year and looking forward to a summer of really hitting the second draft of Fugitive of Crossway very hard, my brother's health took a turn for the worse, and he passed away near the end of summer.

I've stopped a bunch of projects since then, but The Undersea Saga is here to stay, and here's why: I now see it as a small way to honor my brother's memory. It's on account of him that the piddly little stand-alone novella became a full-fledged series, anyway, and I'd hoped to be able to involve him in the development of Fugitive of Crossway as it unfolded... but although that's not going to happen, I'm still going to finish the thing, for sure!

At this point, honestly, I'm nowhere near where I planned on being at the end of last year. If everything had gone the way I'd hoped, I'd be making my final tweaks on Fugitive of Crossway, already sent it off for professional editing, and into the formatting/ design stage.

In reality... I've got three chapters actually "done", I'm headed into the really tricky part of the story that had the most changes and is definitely the middle part of the book that I'm the most iffy about... but where does that leave me for NaNo?

Why not go ahead and give myself a running start on Book 3?

That's right, folks, this November, I'm taking my first crack at Fury of Outwest, the third book in the Undersea Saga, and I'll admit, I'm excited to be able to return to actually pulling off a retelling, rather than "inspired by", as Fugitive of Crossway is!

So what story am I retelling for this third book?

Well, back when I was devising the series as longer than like two or three books, I knew that I wanted to use the four different "kingdoms" as the settings for the various books, and as such, this one would be Outwest.

This would be the most different of the four kingdoms, as it wouldn't exactly be a kingdom, per se... no kings or castles here! I envisioned Outwest as a combination of the American Wild West and the Australian Outback--just hot, desert-y landscape with scattered towns, villages, and ranches throughout, but mostly empty, barren desert.

And what sort of fairy tales take place in the desert? Why, Aladdin, of course!

This one was a bit tricky, as I'd already decided I wanted to write a "steampunk Aladdin", and I'd been jotting down plot ideas for that... but when it came to creating an "Undersea Saga" version of it, I came to the realization that there needed to be a lot more to the story than the "traditional" sense--a street rat comes across a magical item that gives him access to riches beyond reason... but then what?

In particular, I decided to gender-swap the main character. "Aladdin" became "Delaina", an outlaw who survived by raiding stagecoaches that dared cross the desert wasteland. Instead of a lamp with a genie inside... there's going to be a special "magical" device found by our intrepid protagonist, one that provides her with access to riches beyond belief. (I'm not going to go into any detail about the device, because spoilers!) I had already decided on an object back when this was "Steampunk Aladdin", but everything I'd thought of was only confirmed when I saw this premade and knew I had to have it!


I love the look of the device in her hand! I am still deciding whether to give her a prosthetic limb, so that may change by the time the cover design comes around, but there you have it!

Instead of the street rat going through all this charade to win the eye and heart of the princess of the realm... Well, that part I'm going to keep to myself for now, but here's hoping that readers will find my alternative worthwhile still! Suffice to say, I don't think this one will have much romance in it--at least, not where it is just now. I don't know, a character could crop up and catch Delaina's eye as I'm writing the thing. I only have the bare-bones notes at this point. After posting this announcement, that is next on the "writing docket", fleshing out chapter-by-chapter the notes I have. If I see fit to include a romantic subplot, I just might, but for now, it seems that Princess of Undersea is the only book with romance in it, in the series.

Wouldn't that be fitting, though? Making Ylaine and Nathan my only romantic couple in the series? I don't know. I'm still thinking on that one.

Meanwhile, there will be gunfights, subterfuge, and all manner of fun things--including, by way of connection to the rest of the series, an appearance by none other than "Calamity Jacqui" from Fugitive of Crossway. Due to the events of that book, she's no longer a performing carnie... but her role in Fury of Outwest is more that of a bounty hunter. She's been dispatched to track down and "retrieve" the thing that Delaina has... but can the outlaw last long enough to find out the truth?

Hang on to your bowler hats, everyone... this is going to be a wild ride!

Saturday, October 8, 2022

Reader's Review: "Diamond Stained" by JMD Reid


Synopsis from Amazon: 

Burdened by regrets, a disgraced guard turns to a magical blade he is reluctant to wield.

Life had gone wrong for Obhin. Once a respected palace guard, now he sells his sword as a bandit. Trapped by his missteps, he little reason for hope...

Until one young woman sees more in him.

Passionate and headstrong, Avena has no patience for bullies. Haunted by her own bleak past, the healer sees in Obhin a chance for escape...a chance for them both.

This misfit pairing must learn to trust each other as they struggle to survive in a city of poverty and vice, for dark sorcerers, underworld crime bosses, and brutal bandits scheme to destroy them.

Can they polish clean their stained souls?

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My Review:

I've been getting more and more into the grimdark genre, in spite of how squeamish I usually am. Take any movie with above-average violence (for example, if they show the wound actually happen, or the limb actually breaking...) and I'll usually hide my face behind a pillow or turn away from the screen when I know a particularly visceral visual is coming. It's less striking in novels, as I can just "jump" my eyes right over the paragraph detailing the exact moment of injury... but still, when I have to do that in every other scene, it begs the question: am I actually reading the novel, or just skimming it, and where is the enjoyment in that?

The one thing I have noticed, though, in the really good novels-with-a-surplus-of-violence, is that the ones I will continue reading have really great prose! That's what keeps me coming back, more often than not, is the fantastic character arcs, and the meaningful, thought-provoking prose that happens between fight scenes. Those are the parts I slow down and relish; that's what I keep in my mind every time I think of those books.

Guess what? JMD Reid is one of those "good authors" I mentioned a bit ago.

This may be less "grimdark" and more "sword and sorcery with extra violence", but there is quite a bit that I absolutely loved about this book, to counter those things that came across as too intense for me! 

First, can I just rave about the magic/religious system that he's invented for this world, one based on gemstones that grant different abilities based on the type of gemstone--that's the magic part. The society views these gemstones as gifts from their deity, and the colors of each gemstone are associated with a specific virtue--and there's a whole set of religious beliefs based around that. The adherents seek to build their lives around pursuing these "color" virtues, while shunning the Black: all that is wicked and evil and colorless.

But that's just one dimension of it. Another group takes these "colors" and interprets them as "tones": the virtuous Tones exist in harmony with one another, and the Black represents dissonance and disharmony. Both belief systems stem from the desire to emulate these virtues, as a sign of their commitment to their respective deity, the highest standard of morality.

And that's just one facet of what makes this story fascinating! Another is the characters Reid has crafted: Obhin, the dark bandit with his unorthodox views on modesty and his strange personal moral code that permits him to kill and run with gruff and uncouth mercenaries... and yet wracks him with guilt the whole time he's doing it. Avena, with her deep personal trauma that colors her every step and haunts her every moment, that drives her to recklessness and danger... yet it's also that trauma that gives her such keen insight into the nature of wounds and a drive to alleviate even the hurts that the healing topaz won't reach. Normally, the two wouldn't have anything to do with each other, but their fates converge and Obhin switches from attacker to protector, as dark forces conspire to wreak havoc among the people and twist the benefits of these gemstones to amass power for themselves and accomplish their nefarious goals.

Diamond Stained is a brilliant adventure with top-notch storytelling, plot twists that will make you hold your breath, characters that make you laugh and send shivers down your spine at the sight of their name, and all-around a magnificent tale set in a spellbinding world full of richness and depth, the way a fantasy novel should be! I give it *****5 STARS***** in rating--if you're looking for a new world to immerse yourself into, and you don't mind a hefty side of graphic violence in between paragraphs of singing prose, then may I say, Welcome to Kash! The Jewels of Illumination series awaits!

Further Reading: (Sword and Sorcery/Excellent World-Building/Strong Characters)
The Chronicles of Lorrek--Kelly Blanchard
        -Someday I'll Be Redeemed 
        -I Still Have A Soul 
        -I'm Still Alive 
        -Do You Trust Me? 
        -You Left Me No Choice 
        -They Must Be Stopped 
        -Find Me If You Can 
A Tune Of Demons Series--J. E. Mueller
       -Fire's Song 
       -Spirit's Lullaby
The Jill Andersen Series--J. D. Cunegan
       -Bounty 
       -Blood Ties 
       -Behind the Badge 
       -Behind The Mask 
The Red Dog Conspiracy--Patricia Loofbourrow
       -Gutshot (Novellette) 
       -The Alcatraz Coup (Novella) 
       -Vulnerable (Short Story) 
       -Jacq of Spades 
       -Queen of Diamonds 
       -Ace of Clubs 

Saturday, August 27, 2022

Reader's Review: "Hunter" by Joanna White

Synopsis from Amazon:

A reckless young woman named Averella does what no woman has ever done. She disguises herself as a man and purposefully gets herself arrested and thrown into Zagerah. Her brother Gabriel was taken, and with his disease, he will not survive on his own. She has no idea what to expect inside the prison; all she knows is that once men get taken, they never come back.

The Hunters will find her.

Genetically altered to be faster and stronger than humans, the Hunters use their powers to find and kill every prisoner who enters Zagerah. The only ones who can defeat them, are in fact, themselves.

Jared is a Hunter. It’s all he’s known, all he remembers. He kills ruthlessly and without regret, one prisoner after another. When a new prisoner Dalex shows up, everything begins to change. Jared goes undercover to make Dalex and the other prisoners believe he is one of them, a prisoner himself.

No one knows the truth. He will trick them. Toy with them. Then, he will kill them.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>

My Review:

Going by the blurb, one might reasonably expect this story to read like a "Mulan"-type knockoff, right? At least, if Mulan met, say, Shan Yu's son and the two were plunged into an "enemies-to-lovers" type situation. Basic storytelling at its most basic, am I right?

But this is not that. From the very beginning, Joanna White gives us a story that feels familiar, yet plays out in unique and unpredictable ways. All of my expectations were blown away by the end of the first chapter, and I could just settle in to enjoy a thrilling tale with plenty of twists, and no idea where or how it would end up, eventually. Would the slaves really escape? Would Averella's identity be uncovered? Could Dalex be the one to stop Jared from killing all the slaves, or would the story end with everyone dead, and the Hunters succeeding in doing their dark master's will, with any sort of resolution left to the sequels?

White keeps the suspense going by dividing the point of view between Jared and Averella. Occasionally, readers will see the same scenes repeated from each perspective, but other times the new point-of-view picks up where the other left off--and yet no matter which way it goes, the energy never wanes. The story keeps rolling at a brisk pace, captivating the reader's attention as they piece together what's really going on as a combination of the two narratives. I really enjoyed the fact that doing this allowed the reader an extra dimension as to the motivation behind their choices and responses, one that we wouldn't get just from one perspective or another.

I also really loved the whole concept of the Hunters. Their origins, the unique superpowers they are given, and the significance behind the reason they exist. Each of them has a unique power that gives them an advantage (and White's creativity in designing each ability cannot be understated!) yet with it comes a flaw that will render all their Hunter abilities inaccessible. The fugitives take a Hunter captive at one point and then run into a choice of whether to render the Hunter incapacitated through his flaw, or let him keep his abilities, so that the fugitives could use them as an advantage against their pursuers. An extra level of intrigue that opens the door to many plot twists the reader won't see coming!

Finally, the world-building in this novel is top-notch. I could picture each of the environments clearly as I read, and the various threats and struggles faced by the fugitive slaves as they attempt to escape Zagerah were astonishing--even including some mermaids at one point! Although these Merfolk were nothing like the ones I was used to, more the conniving, vicious, Siren-type of creatures. But still awesome!

Hunter easily earns a full *****5 STARS***** and I'd even add to that an Upstream Writer Certified WHOLEHEARTEDLY RECOMMENDED. There are some good moral lessons to be learned in this clean fantasy adventure, all wrapped up and woven through an amazing story with dynamic characters and the potential for wonderment in every book in the Valiant series!


Further Reading: (Clean Reads/Fantasy Adventure/Awesome World-Buidling)

The Alexander Legacy--Sophronia Belle Lyon
       -A Dodge, A Twist, and A Tobacconist 
       -The Pinocchio Factor
The Chronicles of Lorrek--Kelly Blanchard
        -Someday I'll Be Redeemed 
        -I Still Have A Soul 
        -I'm Still Alive 
        -Do You Trust Me? 
        -You Left Me No Choice 
        -They Must Be Stopped 
        -Find Me If You Can 
Verona: The Complete Mermaid Tales--Pauline Creeden
       -Scales 
       -Submerged 
       -Salt 
       -Surfacing
The Bhinian Empire--Miriam Forster
     -City of A Thousand Dolls 
     -Empire of Shadows
Wonderland Guardian Academy Series--Pauline Creeden
       -Red The Wolf Tracker
The Time Tree Chronicles--Lisa Rae Morris
       -The Emergence

Tuesday, August 2, 2022

Reader's Review: "King's Warrior" by Jenelle Leanne Schmidt


 Synopsis from Amazon:

The hope of their world rests on the steel at his side...

Threat of invasion looms. Oraeyn dreams of glory on the battlefield. Instead, he must engage in a battle of wills with a headstrong princess while ushering her to safety (and boredom) in a small village. But they must put aside their differences to save their homeland and complete the second part of their mission: seek out the legendary King’s Warrior to persuade him to take up arms once more.

When their journey leads them to the lost realm of the dragons they get more adventure than either of them bargained for!
>>>>>>>>>

My Review:

There is something to be said for a good, forthright, low fantasy novel! In fact, it plays into a genre I'm just learning about, "noblebright" fantasy, sort of set up as the opposite of "grimdark." Where grimdark fantasy is depressing, dystopian, gritty, and hopeless, usually populated by thugs, thieves, duplicitous noblemen, vagabonds, and antiheroes at best... Noblebright plays into the opposites of that: the characters are typically virtuous, the setting is peaceful and picturesque, challenges do exist, but they're often morally corrupt, and the virtuous heroes and heroines band together to outsmart and defeat the wicked villains.

King's Warrior is a shining example of noblebright fantasy. King Arnaud rules Aom-igh fairly and well, the most recent in a line of kings who established the kingdom after deflecting Dark Warriors from the Dark Country and preventing them from overwhelming and subjugating the people. This is done with the help of the Dragons, who subsequently disappear after promising that, should the Dark Country threaten again, they will lend their aid.

That time is now, but where are the dragons? One person might know where they are, but no one has seen this former King's Warrior in many years. To seek out the King's former friend, King Arnaud sends his own daughter, a trustworthy squire, and the Princess' faithful maidservant. They must travel across the kingdom, braving storms, suspicious villagers, treacherous magic-users, and the first indications of Dark Warrior "strike teams" hitting entire villages and burning them down in preparation for the invasion that looms ever closer with each day they spend looking for the King's Warrior.

It's a clean enough adventure, suitable for middle-grade readers, and I very much enjoyed the plot twists and the plot that was only somewhat predictable. There were some twists that I could see coming the minute the character came on the scene and the other characters expressed their clear assumptions about said character; there were other twists that were on the one hand so delightfully unexpected that I gasped while reading, yet at the same time wondering why the pacing and the narrator kept everyone in the dark for so long.

But that, I think, is the inherent pacing problem that every noblebright fantasy adventure contends with: that protracted journey that is designed to test the predetermined mettle of every specific character, not so much because a group of otherwise-capable people traveling in this region would naturally encounter such a challenge or come into conflict with each other just so... but because there was a point to be made, and the author needed it to be "just so" in order that the point could be made. I am guilty of such a thing myself in my own writing, and I'm trying to be better, but I also recognize how jarring it is to encounter it, as a reader.

That being said, speaking of twists, there are at least three specific twists that happened that were so aptly timed, well-placed, and brilliantly-executed that I'm definitely still interested in seeing how things develop in the rest of the series! I'd give King's Warrior a modest *****4.5 Star Rating***** and I'll include an Upstream Writer Certified RECOMMENDED endorsement. I know there's more in store, from how much I loved Schmidt's short story in a previous anthology (linked below), and I can acknowledge that first books are hard, but it's a decent start, and The Minstrel's Song has only just begun!

Further Reading: (Also By The Author/Clean Reads/Noblebright Fantasy/Sword and Sorcery)
Mythical Doorways--Fellowship of Fantasy (*Contains a story by the author)
The Chronicles of Lorrek--Kelly Blanchard
        -Someday I'll Be Redeemed 
        -I Still Have A Soul 
        -I'm Still Alive 
        -Do You Trust Me? 
        -You Left Me No Choice 
        -They Must Be Stopped 
        -Find Me If You Can 
The Time Tree Chronicles--Lisa Rae Morris
       -The Emergence
The Painter Place Saga--Pamela Poole
       -Painter Place 
       -Hugo 
A Tune Of Demons Series--J. E. Mueller
       -Fire's Song 
       -Spirit's Lullaby

Saturday, July 23, 2022

Serial Saturday: "Fairies Under Glass" Part 19


Part 19
"The Dean's Office"

Lewis groaned and rolled onto his side. Why was his bed suddenly so uncomfortable? He opened his eyes, rubbing away what little sleep he'd gotten. Somehow he was laying on top of his bedding, fully clothed, and his shoulders ached terribly, like he'd pulled a muscle or two.

He reached up to his shoulders and felt the small tears in the fabric. The pain that lanced through him at the mere touch of his fingertips brought everything in the last twelve hours rushing back in painful clarity. The museum!

Lewis rocketed awake and sat upright, glancing down at his hands. The Chain rested against one palm, and there was the Gyth shining up at him from the blanket down at his feet. On instinct, he went to set the two pieces of the Phantasmagyth beside each other, but the memory of the chaos the restored Phantasmagyth wrought prompted him to keep them as far apart as possible. He swung his legs over the side of the bed, noticing that he was still wearing his warehouse jumpsuit, and there were definitely tears in the shoulder. He quickly slipped that outer layer off, noting the further damage to his own clothes underneath.

A small hum of chatter had begun in his closet, and when Lewis opened the door, a whole throng of tiny bodies tumbled out, sparkling as they zipped through the air, and crawling along the ground. Every inch of space was now filled with strangely-shaped gourds, and it smelled strongly of bubblegum.
Lewis snatched a shirt and shoved it over his face, pinching his nose shut as he staggered backwards. "What the heck are those things?" he spluttered.

The elves around his feet were giggling and running through the carpet fibers. A passing fairy paused to answer his question.

"They're special houses we make for ourselves in a safe, dark place. Our word for them is misti."

"Yeah, well now my closet smells like an air freshener factory!" Lewis complained, throwing the shirt over his head and storming to the bathroom to brush his teeth and hair.

Queen Evalia sat on the tile countertop, attended by a gaggle of fairies. "Ah, good morning, Lewis!" she called up to him. "I hope you slept well after yesterday's ordeal."

Lewis groaned as the smell of the misti wafted up from his own shirt. He wrinkled his nose. "Okay, but did your fairykind have to build those funny-smelling gourds in my closet, with all my clothes in there? I don't want to walk around smelling like a girl!"

Evalia tilted her head, then nodded. "Ah, you must be referring to the misti. I'm sorry, the smell is actually quite pleasant when we can spread them out over a larger area--and it is strongest when the misti are fresh. It should wear off in a few days or so."

Lewis returned to the room to fold up his ruined cover-alls and grab his backpack for the day's classes. "Here's hoping, anyway," he muttered. "I'm going to see what the damage is over yesterday's catastrophe. I think all of you should stay out of sight till I can figure out if Krasimir Schlimme is on the lookout for you or not."

He returned to the bed and put the Chain safely in the small pocket at the top of his backpack. The gyth, he wrapped in his ripped shirt and stuffed in a shoebox, which he placed on the shelf lining the top of the closet. He'd have to figure out someplace more secure for what looked like a diamond the size of his fist, but that would have to do for now.

Out in the hallway of his dorm, Lewis glanced at everyone who passed him, his ears picking up on snatches of conversations, listening to what people might be talking about. There were plenty of people mentioning "the museum", and "what the heck happened yesterday", but other than a large poster declaring that Moulton House was "CLOSED FOR REPAIRS", he didn't see much.

Out on the streets of the Browning Academy campus, it was a different story. Warehouse 31 trucks rumbled up and down, along with dumpster trucks for hauling construction debris. Lewis saw a team of Warehouse 31 workers heading toward the museum and walking past him, but when he tried to wave, one of them stopped and pointed.

"You!" she snapped. "You're that kid who did the ride-along yesterday, when the whole building went berserk!"

Lewis felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand up, but it did seem like everyone who caught her comment was infinitely more intent on ignoring them and keeping out of it, than expressing any interest.
"Um, yeah," he stammered. "I was just going to trade in my jumpsuit--"

"Don't," she said, yanking the bundle out of his hands. "Stanley's pretty steamed; word is he's already been to the Dean and complained. You're off the roster, kid. They've never had a student ride-along go so badly. Guess you have to find a posting somewhere else." She shrugged and kept walking, taking his ruined jumpsuit with her.

Lewis stood on the sidewalk, feeling so much like a rowboat set adrift in choppy water. What was he going to do about a job, now that working at the warehouse wasn't an option? The semester had already started, but surely there were openings somewhere! He shrugged and headed to the educational facilities. If he didn't have work duties to report for, the least he could do was attend his classes for the day.

In the Algebra classroom, many students held quiet conversations, spinning theories as to what might have caused the uproar on the day before. Some chalked it up to a prank, others said that the building was old and it just collapsed all of a sudden, while others seemed to think it was sabotage somehow.

"Whatever it was," said one knowledgeable young man with sharp features and sleek, dark hair, "The museum's just going to stay closed for the rest of the year. I hear a bunch of really expensive artwork got damaged by the rumpus."

Lewis could feel his heart thumping, and he wanted more than ever to just melt into a puddle and fade away. How much longer could he hold out until someone figured out he was to blame?

After class, Lewis found Melanie waiting for him in the quadrangle just outside the building. Keats was being his usual adorable self, yapping and rolling onto his back for belly-pats.

Melanie chuckled. "Glad to see he still wants to be friends with you," she remarked. "Come with me. The Dean asked me to bring you to his office for a chat."

Lewis felt the blood drain from his cheeks. The Dean! Stanley had complained about him specifically, hadn't he? Of all the people on campus to know that Lewis Grant had caused the wanton destruction of priceless displays, the Dean would definitely know it was him--and then what? Would Lewis be expelled from Browning Academy? Would he tell Lewis' parents? Evading Krasimir Schlimme was one thing, but trying to hide the truth from his own parents? Lewis didn't think he could, if they asked him at this point.

He felt nothing but trepidation and fear all the long way to the Administrative Block at the far end of campus. Here, there were few students walking about, if any. Mostly faculty tended to have any business at all being in this region of campus, as there weren't any shops or classrooms here, just private offices.

The Dean's office was at the end of one of these buildings, with a plaque bearing his name bolted to the wall just beside the door: "William J. Rushford, Dean of Students." Lewis had only met Mr. Rushford once, at Orientation Night the year before, when he'd first arrived at Browning Academy. He remembered being intimidated by the man, almost terrified of him, but whether that was because Dean Rushford was a terrifying person, or the whole Academy experience had just been dreadfully new to the young man, he couldn't recall. But he was duly terrified now, all things considered.

Melanie led Lewis into the building, and pointed to a few chairs placed alongside the wall while she approached the secretary's desk.

"Lewis Grant is here to see Dean Rushford," she said.

The secretary nodded. "I'll let the Dean know he's here," she answered.

Melanie gave Lewis a small wave as she left. The secretary stepped softly over to the imposing door along the far wall, tapped on it, and poked her head in briefly to say something Lewis couldn't hear. After a moment, she left the door and nodded to the petrified young man. "He's ready for you," she said. "Go ahead."

Lewis took a deep breath to steady his nerves as he crossed the room and entered the door.

Dean Rushford sat at his massive oak desk, but he left his chair to meet Lewis at the front of the room with a ready smile and a firm handshake. He had brown hair streaked with silver and receding a bit from his face, but his straight teeth and clear blue eyes bespoke welcome, not disappointment.
"Lewis Grant," he said warmly, gesturing to one of the chairs placed in front of his desk. "Please take a seat. Good to see you."

Lewis swallowed the lump forming in his throat as he dropped into the seat. He couldn't keep his hands from fidgeting as the Dean returned to the tall leather armchair behind the desk. He shuffled a few papers from a file in front of him. Lewis had a pretty clear idea what those papers might contain.

"Okay, so you're a second-year student here at Browning Academy, it looks like," Rushford murmured. "Grades are looking good, class attendance fulfills expectations..." He set the paper down and clasped his hands in front of him, looking right at Lewis. "It seems that your job security is the part that you've been having trouble with. Why don't you fill me in on why that seems to be the case?"

Lewis opened his mouth, but any words he might want to say seemed to scramble on contact with his brain. "My jobs..." he stammered, but he couldn't finish the sentence. What could he say? I was just fine working in the janitor position until I found out that the artist whose exhibits I cleaned was a sadistic maniac who got away with trapping and displaying creatures from another dimension simply because they weren't human. "Well, uh, it's been... tricky, you know, sir..."

Dean Rushford nodded. "The second year is always the hardest--just when you get the hang of classes, school policy throws you another curve by adding in a work shift you have to keep track of, a job you might not have any experience in, and I know it can be tough." His eyes dropped to the papers on his desk. "Now, from what I can see here, Daniel Gilroy had no issues with your work ethic. He confirmed that you always showed up on time, and wanted to do the best you could with whatever assignment he gave you."

Just hearing the adult saying good things about him was enough to quiet Lewis' nerves.

The Dean continued. "The trouble, it seems, centers around the guest artist we allowed to open an exhibit at Moulton House. I received a letter from Mr. Krasimir Schlimme this morning, telling me that he'd found your skillset sub-par, he has accused you of stealing his artwork, of intentionally defacing some of his displays, and he seems to think that yesterday's debacle had something to do with you." He furrowed his brow in confusion. "Is there anything you'd care to explain to me? Who am I to believe? Mr. Gilroy, who says you're an admirable student and a trustworthy employee, or Mr. Schlimme, who seems to think you are a thief and a troublemaker? Don't worry; nothing you say here will be communicated in any way to Mr. Schlimme, or even Gilroy, for that matter. You can speak freely and in confidence, Lewis."

Actually I can't, Lewis thought to himself miserably. Not one syllable of his true motives could ever be shared, or else the fate of these creatures would be sealed! "Well, sir... I--" Lewis swallowed hard and tried to come up with the right words to say how earnest he was. "I would say that every time I entered Moulton House and put on the uniform, I made it my goal to do my best work, every time."

"And did you, at any point, end up bumping or breaking a display or two, no matter how slight or even accidental?"

Lewis slumped his shoulders. "There were a few times," he began slowly. "Once, when a group of children came into the space during a birthday celebration, they broke a lot of displays and caused a lot of mess. Maybe he was referring to that. There was one other time when I was cleaning and Mr. Schlimme came up behind me and I accidentally knocked a display off the wall... but he was there, and he said not to worry about it."

Dean Rushford leaned back in his chair and tapped his chin. "And at any point, to the best of your knowledge, did you ever see any displays go missing?"

Lewis gulped. How much did Schlimme really know about his attempts to rescue that first group of fairykind? "Well, um," he stammered, "The exhibit hall changed many times, and displays would be in new configurations, or whole new sets of exhibits replacing old ones, but I always assumed it was those Warehouse 31 techs that were responsible for taking the old things down and putting the new ones up. I never did anything like that, as the janitor."

A glint flickered in Dean Rushford's eye. "Except the day Mr. Schlimme was preparing to add the giant sculpture, correct? He enlisted your assistance in transporting the displaced art--"

"To storage, yes," Lewis supplied quickly. It occurred to him that in all of this he never really considered the cameras, the way they were watching him even if Krasimir or Adolf wasn't in the room. "But I never took the pieces out of the museum itself." Because they weren't pieces, they were fairies! His thoughts justified.

Dean Rushford nodded. "Yes, that does seem to coincide with what we saw on the security camera footage. Thank you for your honesty, Lewis." He clasped his hands on the desk in front of him. "Unfortunately, that brings us to Warehouse 31, and Stanley Finch's complaints. He said that you asked a lot of strange questions at the beginning, but that he never expected any issues--until the ride-along where everything went wrong. Stanley insists that he's never had a ride-along that resulted in such a fiasco, yet from everything you've told me, I can't help thinking that he's exaggerating when he tries to pin the blame on you. Again, I've reviewed the camera footage and it seems you weren't even in Exhibit Hall G when the displays collapsed. The foreman sent you to Hall B, didn't he?"

Lewis felt his spirits lift. Really, not even the cameras had noticed his little detour with the Gyth! "He did," he nodded. "I was in there when I heard all the screaming and crashing and shouting." He wagged his head. "Was anyone able to figure out what happened?"

Rushford grinned. "The safety responders found evidence that some pipes running through the ceiling and the outer walls had burst, leaking water and particulate-laden air into the building and causing irreparable damage. It was nobody's fault, really. I just wanted to see what you had to say about it." The Dean nodded slowly as he allowed the news to sink in. "Anyway, that leaves you without a job to fulfill the student-work requirement for your grades, and I'm sorry to inform you, Lewis, that there aren't currently any job openings here on campus. It's after the start of the semester, as you know, so all openings have been filled, with the exception of the warehouse tech position you are of course vacating at this point."

Lewis stiffened. His lack of employment would affect his grades? "What am I going to do, then?"

A smile flickered around the Dean's mouth. "I said there were no openings on campus, but you're in luck! There's a carnival setting up nearby, one that Browning has worked with before, and the manager has said he's willing to employ Academy students while they're here. It's more of an evening shift, you'll need to take the bus to and from campus every time, and you might have to work a few extra days to make up the hours, but the school is willing to sponsor your bus ticket and waive any missing hours, so long as you can keep the job for the duration of the carnival." He stared at Lewis with his piercing gaze. "Can you manage that? No getting into trouble this time?"

Lewis nodded. Anything to keep his grades up! "I'll do my best to stay out of trouble, sir!"

Dean Rushford grinned and reached out to shake his hand. "Wonderful! The manager's name is Mr. Thaddeus Storm. You'll report to the carnival grounds on Friday, right after your classes for the day."
Lewis stood and nodded as he shook the Dean's hand. "Yes, sir. Thank you!"

He exited the office in a much better mood than he'd been several minutes ago. Sure, it didn't sound like much of an arrangement, and leaving campus every day probably meant Lewis had a lot of late nights in his future--but his grades wouldn't suffer, and at least he'd have something to keep him busy while he figured out what to do next to help his Phantasmian friends.
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Saturday, July 2, 2022

Serial Saturday: "Fairies Under Glass" Part 18


Part 18
"Things Go Sideways"

The truck shuddered to a stop, and the jump-suited workers disembarked.

"All right!" barked the man who'd invited Lewis along for the ride. He held a clipboard in his hand. "Let's get these crates out and unloaded in the correct exhibit halls. Half of it's going to Hall B, and the rest is going down into storage for Hall G."

"Oh, hello! Can I help you?" stammered a familiar voice, one that made Lewis cringe and turn toward the wall. Mr. Gilroy!

The delivery handler gave the clipboard to the old curator. "Here's the manifest, sir. We've got some sculptures and paintings for display."

"Hmm, yes," Gilroy skimmed the papers and nodded. "All right, everything seems to be in order. I'll just check things off as you unload."

The man nodded as the others loaded the crates onto flats and dollies. "You know more about where this stuff is going than I do."

Gilroy straightened the lapel of his jacket. "Yes I do--Oh! Young man?" He bustled over to two guys with a crate marked with Krasimir Schlimme's stamp. "Young man," said Gilroy, "this crate is going straight to storage. Take the short way around." He nodded toward a second entrance farther down the back wall of Moulton House.

Lewis saw his chance. He couldn't be sure which crate from Krasimir's warehouse section he'd slipped the Gyth into, but he figured he had enough time to search through them once they were in storage. He flipped up his collar as high as it would go, and pulled his hat down to mostly conceal his face. Seizing the handle on a flat bearing a second crate of Krasimir's "stash", he followed his coworker down to the entrance Gilroy indicated.

"Hey!" the handler barked. "New guy!"

Lewis froze in his tracks and turned to face him. The man pointed to another crate. "Take this one over to Hall B and start unloading," he said.

Someone else stepped in to take the crate from him, and Lewis had no choice but to leave all that behind. He trundled the crate up the utility entrance and started going through the motions of blindly unloading the paintings meant for display, while museum staff set the frames in their predetermined spots.

After the crate was empty, Lewis found himself inside the museum with nothing immediately to do. As much as he felt the urge to stop by Hall G and revisit his friends, he suppressed it, instead heading over to the stairwell down to the storage area. He walked with intentionality, and yet kept his head bent to obscure as much of his face as possible. He arrived in that back room just in time to hear Gilroy becoming very worried.

"Oh, dear, I wonder what this could mean..."

Lewis squinted through the doorway, full of curiosity. Gilroy stood at the table with the delivery foreman. A crate stood open between them, and on the table amid other trinkets and "fairy sculptures", lay the immense Gyth!

Gilroy was examining the manifest very closely. "Hmm, no... I don't see anything about this on there. Where did you say you got this?"

The handler huffed. "I'm not saying anything! If it's in the crate, it had to have come from the warehouse, and if it's from the warehouse, it belongs to this Schlimme guy, so what's the big deal? He must have left it off the request when they entered the manifest to be filled."

"Well," Gilroy hefted the large gem in his hand. "I suppose I'll just have to take it to him and ask what he intends to do with such a display. It's certainly nothing like anything else he has made!"

The curator headed for the door while Lewis was lost in thought, and there wasn't much time to think of an excuse for being down there before the door swung open and almost knocked him over.

"Oh! Sorry, young man!" Gilroy gasped, as the collision knocked the glasses off his nose. The Gyth slipped from his grasp as the old man fumbled, and Lewis barely caught it.

"No harm done, sir," Lewis said, keeping his face pointed away from the curator's sight. "Shall I take this to Mr. Schlimme's office, myself?"

"Eh?" Gilroy grunted, still fidgeting with his glasses and trying to get them on right. "Oh, of course; I'm a very busy man, and I don't much like to pry--but I suppose if you're working at the warehouse, then it would be your business if an item is left off the manifest!"

Lewis pivoted and had his back to Gilroy by the time the old man had his glasses on straight. Take it straight to Krasimir, he thought to himself, Yeah right!

Walking back into the hallway, he studied the Gyth back and front as he mulled over what to do with it. A fain set of grooves along the gold setting at the back caught his attention. The way they were shaped, they almost looked like--

"Links in a chain," Lewis muttered under his breath. Not just any links, though. He stopped in the hallway just outside Hall G and slid his backpack off his shoulder. Opening the small pocket at the very front, he pulled out the Chain. The links there had the same shape and pattern!

A faint fluttering sound overhead made him think of his fairy friends. He imagined actually being able to ask them about it, once they could converse in private. "Hmm, is this how they're supposed to go--"
While he mused, Lewis held the Chain in one hand and the Gyth in the other, and brought his hands closer. He felt the pull of attraction between the two metal surfaces, like a magnet, and as soon as he said the word, "together?" the two pieces connected with a satisfying snap.

The ground began to shake and rumble under his feet, and Lewis heard crashing and banging happening within Exhibit Hall G. He dropped the Phantasmagyth around his neck and slung his backpack over his shoulders as Warehouse 31 techs and museum staff came running.

Lewis went straight for the doors of the exhibit hall, and when he flung them open, a scene of pure chaos erupted before him.

Fairies flew in all directions, while elves climbed up the walls and loosened displays from their shelves and frames. Glass panes shattered, and walls crashed as Lisa the giant stretched out her legs and boomed, "What's going on?"

Lewis located Gathlen in the midst of all the confusion and made straight for the unicorn.

"Lewis!" whinnied the former Guardian. "Have you come to release us all?"

A spinning cloud of fairies zoomed out of the room chiming "FREEDOM!!" and sounding like a drunken bell choir.

"Help me!" Lewis gasped. "All I did was put the Phantasmagyth back together. What's going on?"
Gathlen danced around to avoid stomping on the elves underfoot. "You mean," he blustered, "you don't know?"

"What is that supposed to mean?" Lewis retorted. "If Krasimir Schlimme finds everybody out of their displays, he's going to--"

"What is the meaning of this?" Thundered a savage voice, and Adolf charged into the exhibit hall, followed by a gang of burly, flat-faced thugs. The thugs all spread out with bags and began rounding up the fairies, while Adolf pointed straight at Lewis. "You!" he roared, and he lunged toward the young man.

The bodyguard never got the chance. As Lewis cringed and braced himself for the impact, a high screech split the air, and Lewis looked up in time to see a fearsome lion with claws outstretched, swooping down on massive eagle wings.

"Oh snap!" Lewis yelped, turning and taking off across the exhibit hall floor. Another rumble knocked him off-balance, and a portion of the ceiling crumbled, jarred by Lisa's shoulder.

Lewis kept running, dodging falling pieces of rubble and doing his best not to trip over the fairyfolk and random goblins and ogres rushing around the area.

Something struck his shin and knocked his feet out from under him. Lewis rolled onto his back just in time for the gryphon to sink its claws into his shoulders.

"Augh!" Lewis groaned. "I'm a friend! I swear!"

The talons dug in deeper, and the gryphon began beating its wings. Lewis felt the ground drop away behind him, as the gryphon carried him higher and higher above the milling crowd.

"No!" He reached up and grabbed the talons, his entire body weight now dependent on the creature's grip. "Please, no!"

The gryphon hovered in the air, almost level with the ceiling. It leaned in close, opened its beak, and shrieked right in Lewis' face. Then, as his entire head rang with the deafening noise, it let go.

"AAAAAUUUGGGGHHH!!" Lewis screamed all the way down.

Halfway to the floor, his back connected with something soft, and he saw fingers curl over him.

"Caught you," Lisa murmured, lowering him gently to the floor.

The fairies and goblins were already pouring out of the gaps in the wall of the museum, and the screams of the unsuspecting public were increasing with each passing moment. It was Lewis' worst nightmare, unfolding before his eyes.

Gathlen galloped up to him. "Lewis! You've got to get that thing out of here!" he dipped his nose to indicate the Phantasmagyth still hanging around the young man's neck. "Come with me!"

Lewis moved automatically, swinging onto Gathlen's back as the unicorn charged through a gap in the wall. A net hissed over their heads, draping around Lisa and trapping her arms at her sides.

There were already so many people gathered on the far side of the street with their phones and cameras out, taking pictures of the destroyed museum and the glittering clouds pouring from it, not to mention the gigantic dark-haired woman wriggling frantically against her bonds.

Gathlen kept running till he reached the quadrangle on the far side of Browning Academy campus. There was a small forest there, thick with trees and highly adequate for hiding.

"How do I fix this?" Lewis demanded desperately. "I'm pretty sure every single Phantasmian in the area just woke up, and the Underworlders have rounded up most of the fairykind--but there's the gryphon who got loose, and who knows what they're going to do to Lisa..."

Gathlen bucked his head. "Take the Gyth off the Chain!"

Lewis lifted the gem, but the chain and the back of the Gyth seemed to have fused into one piece. "How, though?" he wailed. "It's stuck! I can't--"

A menacing roar cut off his words, and Lewis dodged just in time to avoid the dark shape that hurtled out of the bushes toward him. A wolf! But not just any wolf.

Lewis saw the way the beast glared at him, the way it snarled and slunk toward him.

"Adolf!" Gathlen whispered.

"Give... me... the... Phantasmagyth, boy!" Adolf's deep, hollow voice issued from the wolf's mouth.

"Take it off!" Gathlen repeated from his hiding spot, as Adolf's confident steps closed the distance between him and Lewis.

"I'm telling you, I--" Lewis felt his fingers close around the edges of the gem, and in the same moment, the Chain fell away, and Adolf launched himself at the defenseless boy.

Lewis caught the full weight of a man slumping against him, and there was little he could do as Adolf's human head connected with a tree behind him, knocking the bodyguard out cold. Lewis worked his way to his feet.

"Gathlen," he whispered, "it worked!" He heard no answer, so he wandered toward the last place he'd seen the unicorn. "Gathlen?"

Inside a thicket nearby, he found the unicorn, cold and stiff, with his hooves poised in the air, just the way he'd been paralyzed. Lewis felt a twinge of disappointment, but he backed away and left Adolf and Gathlen behind. Krasimir's agents would find him eventually.

On his way back to the dorms, Lewis glanced toward the section of campus where Moulton House stood. The jagged edge of the ruined wall still jutted against the sky under the setting sun, and there were still plenty of people and emergency services personnel on the scene.

His shoulders ached where the gryphon had clawed him, and Lewis' whole body felt like it was made of jelly.

Within moments, a cloud of glittering, shimmering lights surrounded him, as all the fairies freed from their displays who managed to escape the goblins now gathered around the one responsible for their freedom.

"Thank you, noble human!" chimed a fairy. "We have been dispatched by our Queen to carry you back to your place of rest."

Lewis couldn't even concentrate enough to respond, but he felt the tug of dozens of tiny hands on his clothes, and his feet no longer touched the ground. Instead, he floated, borne on a cloud of light, all the way to the dorms.

The fairies didn't use the door, but the window to his room slid open on their approach, and the fairies carefully slid the backpack off his back before they deposited him safely on his bed. Sleep finally claimed him, and Lewis spent the rest of the night dreaming of hopping goblins, clattering fairies, angry gryphons clawing at him, and vicious werewolves chasing him through an endless labyrinthine museum that continuously crumbled around him as he ran and ran.
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Tuesday, June 28, 2022

Reader's Review: "Threats By Numbers" by Kimberly A. Rogers

 
Synopsis from Amazon:

Everyone has a number but only a few can see them. I’m one of those few. And now it might get me killed.

I’ve been in hiding all my life. Working as a secretary for a paranormal relocation and PR firm is quiet, simple, and above all filled with low numbers. But then I see a man who’s registering as a Ten — They aren’t supposed to exist. To make matters worse, he’s the firm’s new security specialist.

One incident changes everything. In protecting the firm, I’ve been exposed and now far bigger threats are closing in on me. Hunters who won’t stop until they’ve brought me down. I don’t know who to trust.

The most dangerous man I’ve ever met is offering protection. But trusting him might be the last thing I ever do.

Threats by Numbers is a fast-paced Supernatural Thriller with romance and humor set in an urban fantasy world
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My Review:

Back in 2015, I encountered Kimberly Rogers for the first time, through her series the Therian Way, which was part urban fantasy, part alternate-universe (where humans, Elves, and Therians--shifters--coexisted in the modern world), and part clean romance, and all of a sudden I had an author and characters I could obsess over! I didn't realize how much I actually enjoyed a good shifter story, because till that point the only shifter novels I'd heard of were Omegaverse smut, or just really dark trashy stuff

But this? This was beautiful, enthralling, and absolutely wholesome.

But that is all to say that I have come into the "Rogue Spotter Universe" knowing that Rogers is an author I trust to deliver excellent twists, a well-paced plot, great characters... and the fact that she's currently re-vamping the Therian Way series, so this is pretty much the only way I'll be able to enjoy anything close to those characters for the immediate future! (Boo...)
That being said, in the absence of Therians Baran and Raina.... Lauren and Mathias are a reasonable substitute. I wouldn't say "comparable", but "reasonable."

Not going to lie, I really enjoyed it. First of all, it's set in the Seattle/Olympia area, which very familiar to me, living in the Pacific Northwest my whole life! Rogers nails the vibe of that place, even with her paranormal twists to it--I get definite Grimm or Supernatural feels in this one! Whereas this series seems more focused on Fae factions than actual shifters, Rogers still displays a strong grasp of folklore and masterful ability to create her own original brand of "superpowers", such as the eponymous Spotter, a parahuman with the ability to see a person's threat level, depicted as a number from 1 to 10 hovering over the person's head.

Lauren, a Spotter, has been keeping her head down and staying low-profile for a few years as she's worked for a PR firm that deals with relocating monsters and paranormal entities that threaten the safety of normal people living around them. She's a simple secretary, completely comfortable in maintaining a bubble of low-risk people around her.

Mathias arrives as a security assessor dispatched to the firm to ensure that intimate company secrets are not threatened, no leaks are imminent, and that they can continue their job of cleaning up and quieting down rumors and encounters with paranormal beasties and other sorts, maintaining the safety and status quo of their clientele... but in Lauren's eyes, he's the most dangerous person there.

It's kind of obvious from the start where the whole story arc is headed, at least where Lauren and Mathias are concerned. Just your bog-standard enemies-to-lovers, will-they-won't-they, wholesome romance. It's the part of the plot that doesn't deal with the relationship drama that I found most intriguing, though, and that I think is where Rogers shines. It's a web of mystery carefully constructed and patiently doled out one scenario at a time, with moments you see coming, and twists you don't. And it seems the partnership between Lauren and Mathias has only just begun!

I would give Threats By Numbers a hearty *****4.5 STARS***** and include for good measure an Upstream Writer Certified WHOLEHEARTEDLY RECOMMENDED, if only because it comes from very much a trusted source! It's a bit mundane in its plot in many ways, but if you come for the romance, guaranteed you're going to stay for the intrigue, the world-building, the fantastic lore, and the amazingness still to come!

Further Reading: (Also by the Author/Urban fantasy/Wholesome/Romance)
The Therian Way--Kimberly Rogers
       -Leopard's Heart 
       -Wolf's Path  
       -Tiger's Shadow
Verona: The Complete Mermaid Tales--Pauline Creeden
       -Scales 
       -Submerged 
       -Salt 
       -Surfacing
The Fair Folk Chronicles--Jeffrey Cook and Katherine Perkins
        -Foul is Fair 
        -Street Fair 
        -A Fair Fight 
        -All's Fair 
The Alexander Legacy--Sophronia Belle Lyon
       -A Dodge, A Twist, and A Tobacconist 
       -The Pinocchio Factor
The Bhinian Empire--Miriam Forster
     -City of A Thousand Dolls 
     -Empire of Shadows
Wonderland Guardian Academy Series--Pauline Creeden
       -Red The Wolf Tracker
The Time Tree Chronicles--Lisa Rae Morris
       -The Emergence